Hello guys, Sorry for not coming to class on wed. didnt feel well, a bit better though, If you need to share anything about the class just come and say it in here! Hanieh

Hi my dear teacher

Execuse me for my delay, because I was on trip and I didn't have any access to internet,so now at 2am on saturday I am at home. So I hope that you will accept my writing. <<== NO PROBLEM!:) Hanieh

Sanaz: Hey, That boy told you something bad.

Aila: Yeah,It seems that he is a rude guy.
S: I get so annoyed with boys like that and I am supposed to slap them.
A: Me too, like, last week my sister had an argument with a man who knocked her in the mall and he was like "It's my way,what's your problem"
S: That reminds me of(remind you OF sth ) impolite people who cut in line and pushed ahead me like getting some free food from mosque in moharam month. They (capital letter) tried to get like three meals.
A: really, the officials of mosque shoud have thought about this problem. <<<<==== =))
written by SANAZ

Thanks Sanaz! Well done! :) Just two mistakes :)! Hanieh

Hi pals ;)

Please feel free to write whatever you love to share with your friends.
But first of all I need to see your conversation with 'like' and expressions for sharing the ideas. Looking forward to seeing your homework in here! :D

Hanieh Ak.

armita ansari
Hi guys again, I checked Sanaz's question, must + have+ NOT + p.p is wrong.
must comes after the modals. e.g.:
She must not have been polite.
must+not+have+p.p is right! Hope this helps, H.



Hi,Miss Akbarimehr
It is my writting about sharing experiences:

A:We had a neighbour who was always listening to music very loudly.One day i had an important exam so i wanted her to turn it down.But i understood from her facial expressions that she got angry.

B:You are right.I get impatient with people like that.

A:In my opinion some people cant live in apartments because living in apartments needs a special culture.They have to respect their neighbours and care about their rights.

B:Ofcourse! I agree with you. That is like my neighbour. She is always coming over the stairs even like midnight.It is so irritating.

A:Speaking of inconsiderate people who do not care about others rights makes me angry.Just last night our next door neighbour had some guests.They were talking and laughing very loudly and didnt let me sleep at all.I should have said something to them like kind of warning but i didnt.

Written by Fahimeh forghani
Thanks Fahimeh, Happy Fiter Eid, please go over the conversation again and make the necessary changes, I have written the parts you need to revise in ( ). Thank you so much for being the first to write! Enjoy your holiday :), Hanieh.


Hi Miss Akbarimehr

'I ' is always CAPITAL!
A:Some people threw their trash on the street.

B:Yeah.They do ( you need sth in here) without any attention.something (they do 'it' )

A:I get so annoyed whit (dictation) people like thay. (thay???? them ??? what???)them...right:)

B:So am i.Like,i get upset when people cause dirty (make public places dirty)publice places,and it makes somebady (??what do you mean??) angry .like park-cinema-jangale-street-sidewalk.....it makes somebody?? what does this mean?

A:That reminds me of the time i have been gone the park,i saw a family tossed empety soda cans on the park .right?

B:They must not have impolit. (They must be impolite...think about your mistake)yes,mistake

A:They should be ashemed of themselves.

B:Ithink they should get punishment. (They should be punished...)
Written by armita ansari
UR BEST TCHR
Thank you Armita, dear go over your conversation again, you need to work on the 'passive voice' I have written the parts you need to pay attention in (), so you can have a look and change the parts necessary. Thank you :), Hanieh.Tank you
Armita dear remember that 'I' is always CAPITAL. Thanks for the corrections!:)

Hi Miss akbarimehr

Every morning God and I are forgeting.I forget his goodness and he gets over my mistakes, so I love him.
Nice :) Thanks!
Sara:Today I’m totally sad.
Kati:Why do you have this feeling?
Sara: yesterday I got a bus with my
grandmom and she was tired.No body
didn’t allow her to sit.
Kati:That reminds me of the time in the subway
an old woman (she’s like 80 years old) and a girl
came and just a seat was empty, girl sat in the seat
sooner than her,I offerd the old woman my seat to be poliet.
Sara:I had that happen to me and I get annoyed with people like this.

Kati:speaking of rude people, they don’t know how should be show in our society.

Thank you Hanieh, nice conversation, natural and nice! Check the parts I have written in (). Thanks, c u all tomorrow! God willing !

Written by: Hanieh akhgari

Hi Hanieh, thanks but still you haven't checked the mistakes! Hani-tchr

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dear sara,

I am sorry for my actions and I hope that we can put it behind us.Please allow me(let me apologize is probably better) to apologize for what I did on Sunday.

My behavior was extremely inappropriate .It was entirely my fault; our friendship means so much to me. I look forward to learning from you soon.


Sincerely,
armita
Thank you Armita nice apology note :) Thank you.

Hi,Miss Akbarimehr

This is my writing:

I feel i should apologize for being late.Yesterday i had teribble headache and i didnt sleep well last night.So i over slept.I know i should have set my alarm clock but i forgot.It was my fault entirely.Im sure you got so tired of waiting for me.Im so sorry.I promise you to not repeat it again.

Written by Fahimeh Forghani Thank you so much Fahimeh but I have to kill you, how many times have I mentioned you all about capital letters, esp (i)... 'i' is always capital, remember, but thank you , nice note:)! Hanieh



Dear Mrs Nikoo, (Who is Mrs. Nikoo?)
I feel I should apologize for hitting your car that was parked in our alley yesterday. I was in a hurry and I couldn't stand for you. I know, I should have called you at that moment but I had an important meeting which I couldn't delay.
Today, I would get your car repaired and I promise I will be more careful in the future, especially about my neighbors'(') cars.

faithfully,(You need comma here)
Sanaz
hi miss akbair
i just wanted to aplogize for missint your birthday party i should have call you and said itrayl i wanteb to sav im sorry sor not tellinj u about my trayli ipromi se i will not sorjp in dthe future

faezeh ===>>Faezeh dear be careful about your spelling and also capital letters, check it AGAIN please, thanks!

Thank you so much Sanaz, lovely apology note:D! Hanieh! :)

Hi miss akbarimehr excuseme about my delay (Hanieh)

Dear kati,

I just wanted to apologize for your party ,that I couldn’t come .

I should have came because of you, and also I could have said to you about my absent .

I wanted to say sorry for my mistake .

I promise I'll be more respectful next time.

Hanieh ==> every time you write in here late, that's fine, why were you absent today?

(Iranian life style)

Hi miss akbarimehr

About Iranian life style we could name the main point. The point is family and Iranian relation. What's more , In Iran every body take their time with their family. They eat their meal with family. Usually Iranian people go to the family party, even though some times they have singular party. For an Iranian person family is important. Consequently they are socializing with their family so they enjoy.

Hanieh

Thanks but just one contrasting idea??? Hanieh

I have lived in Iran and I haven't seen another countries yet. Due to it I can't compare life style in my country with others.
Despite the fact that getting job is very hard, people try to go to university seriously. On the one hand It seems good for them, but on the other hand It's bad, because of lack of jobs.
As a result, people try to go abroad, they don't like it though.
I think goverment should solve this problem, otherwise we miss all of the elites of our country.
SANAZ
Wonderful usage of discoourse markers! LOvely! Thank you Sanaaz! See, your writing becomes nicer when you use these! Thanks!